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    The Twin Neko sisters Good Vs Evil

Written by : Tiva M. Camacho

It is a cold and stormy night. It is a great night to off pull the perfect crime. Two girls are walking home from a friend’s house. These girls have a secret to hide from their village. They are Neko's, half cat half human. One girl has red eyes and black hair that goes all the way down to the back of her foot. She is wearing a black and dark blue dress that reaches up to her thigh. She is also wearing blood red ballet slippers. She is 15 years old. Her name is Crescent Moon (Crest). Her sister has sky blue eyes. Her hair is a light blue but people think it is white because of how light it is. She also is wearing the same thing her sister wears but hers is white with baby blue ribbons. Her ballet slippers are pink and she is 15 years old. Her name is Mime.As they arrive home, their mother and father start to yell and call them names such as, dump,monster,ugly as they ran up to their room. “I hate them so much Mime” Crest says, trying to fight the tears. “I know Crest but they are all we have left”, Mime cried. Late that night Crest decided to take care of her parents once and for all. She went into the kitchen and grabbed the biggest knife she could find. She went into her mom and dad's room and killed them. Afterwards, she ran away and has been killing over and over again.

Meanwhile, Mime couldn't take the abuse anymore so she learned how to fight with or without a knife. Six years later, Mime went looking for her sister. However, every time she would come close to finding her, all she would find were dead bodies and the words, “Monster, Insanity, demon.” Monster, insanity, and demon meant that Crest had been there, and judging by the fresh blood she had only left a few minutes ago. “I miss you sister, come home”, she said with tears in her eyes. In the shadows, her older sister is watching her with tear in her eyes as well. “Happy birthday Mime”, Crest whispered. Crest thought about going to Mime and was undecided until she saw her sister’s tears. At that point, Crest moved out of the shadows.

“Happy birthday Mime”, Crest said as her little sister turned around. As Mime looked at her older sister, she noticed that Crest was wearing a mini skirt with dark hot pink and black checkered suspenders. Her socks were striped and they went up to her lower thigh, while her hair was now a light pink. However, her cat ears and tail were still black. She had the same colored gloves as her socks, and she had a black belly shirt with a skull on it. “Thank you Crest, I can't believe you remembered after all these years” Mime said, trying to fight back tears. Crest looked at her sister and noticed that she looked different too. Her light blue hair was now pure white with rainbow highlights. Her hair was all the way down to the back of her knees but she kept it in a high ponytail. The dress that she was wearing was red with a sweetheart neckline. It was black lace and had a picture of a heart with wings and a halo above the heart. She also was wearing knee high, black high heel boots. “Mime you're my little sister but I have to go. See you later” Crest said, as she disappeared into the night sky.

Watching her sister disappear from sight, Mime didn't need to wonder why her sister left in such a hurry. Mime instinctively knew that they were now enemies and are destined for one to live and one to die. She didn't know why but she knew the same way a cat knows a mouse is its prey.

“I will find you and I will defeat you sister” Mime said, crying on the floor for the loss of her sister that she loved the most. Crest made it back to her hideout but not before she killed a few more people. “I'm home and I got you guys something” she said, as two wolves came out of the dark. One wolf was white and the other was black. They howled as she threw their food. She watched as they ate it. “I miss my sister so much” she sobbed. The wolves tried to make her feel better but nothing they did could make her heart heal. She sang a song that was also a poem.

”Come little children I'll take thee away into a land of enchantment, come little children the time come to play here in my garden of shadows. Follow sweet children I'll show thee the way through all the pain and the sorrows” 

***This was originally sung by Sarah Jessica Parker but Edgar Allan Poe originally wrote it as a poem.

After she was done singing she fell asleep.

Ten months later it was time to fight. Mime vs Crest, who will win, the good girl or the bad girl? “Mime give up now and I won't kill you… slowly that is” Crest said, in a demonic tone. “I will never give up as long as you're still hurting people” Mime yelled. Crest laughed. ”Mime, you're so funny” Crest scoffed. “I will protect the people in this village even if it cost me my life. I will fight for what’s right and defeat those who do wrong, even if it is my own sister”, Mime yelled. “Really, you're going to stop me? Well, good luck with that little sister” Crest joked, as she attacked her sister with a scythe in her hand. Mime pulled out her Kantian and aimed it at her sister's heart. ”Mime, why fight me when you know you're going to lose?” Crescent yelled, as she made a gash in her sister lower rib cage.

After an hour of fighting, both were badly injured and bruised. They had cuts all over their body and they were covered in blood. ”Why? “Mime asked, gasping for air. ”Why? What do you mean why?” Crescent said, not really caring if she couldn’t breathe. “Why do you kill, steal, and burn people alive. You don't even care if you kill me” Mime yelled, as the rage she been hiding finally escaped. ”Listen Mime I kill because it’s fun. I steal because I can. I burn people alive because I want them to suffer the way I did!” Crescent yelled.


”Mime go away” Crescent yelled, with tears in her eyes. ”Crest tell me what’s wrong. Did you get in another fight?” Mime asked. ”GO AWAY NOW, BEFORE I HIT YOU SO HARD YOU DIE!!!” Crest yelled, as Mime ran away crying her 5 year old eyes out. “I’m the oldest out of 5 sets of twins you see? In order, it’s me and Mime, Alex and Jay, Coco and Devin, Tia and Je-Je, and Ray and Romeo.” Crescent said, to her stuffed rabbit. Crest’s stuffed rabbit was made of different colored stuffed rabbits. ”Hey crazy, are you talking to yourself again? Loser!” said one of the kids that Crest went to school with.

That’s when Crescent snapped and beat the boy up so bad that he had to go to the hospital. He had to get stitches and the doctors said that he'd be hospitalized for 20 years, more or less. The bullying got worse at school, and instead of Crescent getting picked on by the bullies, she was picked on by her brothers and sisters so she beat them up as well. Her real mom and dad were scared of her so they sent her and Mime away. As a precaution, they also sent Mime because they were afraid that being twins, they would be the same.

*end of flashback*

“Mime I know what to do to you when I kill you. First, I'll take out your insides. Then, I'll take those pretty eyes of yours. I'll take out your brain and bones and I'll sew buttons where your eyes should be. When that is done, I’ll sew your mouth closed into a smile, and put stuffing into you. Finally, I’ll sew you back up and keep you as a doll” Crescent said, while laughing. “You're sick Crest” Mime yelled, going in for another attack. ”You should give up before you die and stop calling me that we are not little kids anymore” Crescent said, as she blocked the attack. Crest was injured with a huge gash on her stomach. She has two broken rib cages, a black eye, and a cut down her other eye. Her nose and mouth are bleeding and her tail bone was broken. Mime had two black eyes, a huge gash on both her legs and one on her arm. She was bleeding from her forehead, nose and mouth. She was covered in bruises, and had a broken rib cage. “LISTEN SISTER, YOU WILL NOT WIN TODAY OR EVER. DO YOU HEAR ME?!!!” Mime yelled, while stabbing Crescent in her leg. Crescent screamed in pain as blood flowed down her leg. ”Bye Mime” Crescent said, as she disappeared. ”Not again, oh come on!” Mime yelled.

Ten months later it was Mime’s and Crest’s birthday. Both sisters’ wounds have fully healed and Crest has started training more. Mime on the other hand was helping people in the village. Little did they know that someone was watching them as they went about their daily practices. In different parts of the village both sister's began singing Hallelujah.

”I've heard there was a secret chord. That David played, and it pleased the Lord. But you don't really care for music, do you?. It goes like this. The fourth, the fifth. The minor fall, the major lift. The baffled king composing Hallelujah. Hallelujah, Hallelujah Hallelujah, Hallelujah. Your faith was strong but you needed proof. You saw her bathing on the roof. Her beauty in the moonlight overthrew you. She tied you to a kitchen chair. She broke your throne, and she cut your hair. And from your lips she drew the Hallelujah. Hallelujah, Hallelujah, Hallelujah, Hallelujah.”

***This song was originally written by Leonard Cohen and sang by him too.

Mime and Crescent sang as they fell to sleep. The next day they woke up chained up to a wall. ”W-where am I?” Mime asked herself, as she looked around the room but stopped when she came across a figure in the corner of the room.

To be continued…..


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